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Zedwin's Interesting Life
by
Keane, age 10.

One day Zedwin was walking about with his friends when suddenly there was a stroke of lightening! All of Zedwin’s friends ran off because they were scared. Zedwin stood there because he was not a scaredy cat. He was wondering why there was thunder and lightening when it was such a nice day. Then he was knocked out by a brick! He was amazed to find that he was in another world of aliens.

When he got there the aliens had only one eye. They wore raggedy clothes and trainers. Instead of having mobile phones they talked through their watches. They had antennas on the top of their heads. The girls were grey and the boys were green. He met an alien called Harryeke. Harryeke was a friendly alien. He had two antennas and he was 20 years old. Harryeke was the power of water. He supplied the world with water.

“Oh, where in the world am I?” asked Zedwin out-loud. An alien said,

“You’re in the world of Bonbons.”

In this world people got around by cycling bikes. Their bikes were black and grey. They could cycle upstairs. An alien said,

“we live in a big bonbon. It is very, very hot. It is never cold because we live in the sun. However, the bonbon can protect its self from the sun. It has a shield around the world.”

The next day Planet Bonbon fought the World of Dingding. Planet Bonbon went around on cycling bikes throwing bonbons at their enemies. In response Planet Dingding threw carrots at their opponents. Planet Bonbon climbed St. Bonbon Castle and from it’s turrets they threw eggs. In the end Planet Bonbon and Planet Dingding thought it was a bit silly to fight and the war ended.

Zedwin ducked from a flying bonbon and fell in a hole and he found himself on earth.