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The Fog
by Robbie Lawrence, age 15
That afternoon Mr Haydock made his way down to the
grocers on Parsons Avenue. The air was peaceful and
as he walked he hummed the hornpipe. Brown leaves trickled
down on to the grey cobblestones and his footsteps echoed
like stifled gunshots reminding him of the past months.
On reaching the dirty old shop he entered with a cheerful
smile and began packing items into his wicker bag. A
loaf of bread, two jars of honey and a bottle of sherry,
Aunt Fanny's favourite. The passive old man standing
at the counter gave him his change and stiffly saluted
him as he left the shop.
The sky was dark now, brooding with silent menace.
A chill ran through Mr Haydock's bones. He pondered
on going back to the house and wait till morning. Anna
would still be lying in bed, her red hair spread across
the pillow, willing him to come back.
"No," he said to himself and with a resolute shake of
his shoulders continued towards the wood. Aunt Fanny
was definitely ill. She had sounded it on the phone.
Croaking like a glutinous frog that she was far too
unwell to do her shopping. Looking out of the window
the weather had seemed clement and welcoming. He had
agreed and said he would be round at hers between four
and five depending on when he got out the house. Unfortunately
the weather had not lasted and it was almost pitch black
by the time he came to the edge of the wood.
The gnarled trunks of the oaks glared at him with furrowed
wooden eyebrows. I can still go back, a voice in his
head said. Fanny will be fine until the morning.
"No," he shouted, anger pulsing through him at his own
cowardice.
The path was incredibly muddy and as he tramped along
flecks of dirt splashed up on to his face. Terror was
creeping into his mind. A strange thumping banged against
his eardrums and he felt as if he was about to collapse.
He began to jog, letting the light breeze brush through
his hair, relaxing him. The beating stopped. The mud
on the ground seemed to thin. Everything was becoming
quieter and quieter. Rounding the bend he saw a bridge
sitting forlorn and alone at the end of the path. Relief,
hot and comforting, seeped through him like a glass
of whisky. He was not far from Fanny's now. Her house
was just three hundred meters from the bridge. Confidently
he moved forward ignoring the fog which had been at
the beginning of the walk thin and unopposing but was
now thick like mustard gas around him.
Closer and closer the bridge seemed smiling at him
through the mist. He was almost there when he heard
it. A strange humming through the trees. Glancing around
he realised that he could hardly see a thing. Panic
began to swell in his heart blackening his vision even
more. He turned back towards the bridge, or at least
where he thought it was, his arms outstretched as if
he was blind. Strange shapes were moving around him.
Men were screaming sorrowful melodies. Calling out to
them, tears in his eyes he ran. Mortars burst, shells
exploded, rifles cracked, men died. Everything was happening
around him until he tripped.
Air rushed up to meet him as he plummeted down down
down into astronomical blackness. He was laughing; Anna
was lying in his arms; the man at the grocers was saluting
and then he was dead. Floating in the ice cold water
fifty feet below the bridge.
The fog hung in the air like cotton wool and a small
bird chirped at the pro longed silence the man had left.
The bridge sat as if in mourning for the man lying beneath
it. Three hundred meters from the bridge in her small
wooden house, Aunt Fanny grumbled.
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