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(written
by children from Hounslow Manor School, Lampton School,
Chiswick Community School, Brentford School for Girls,
Feltham Community College, and Isleworth & Syon School
for Boys as part of the Brentford RTG BIG READ 2006)
On one Christmas winter day everyone was opening presents
and having nice Christmas food, except one boy called
Tony. He was a tall 15 year old young man, who was miserable
because he overheard his mother and father's row. Eventually
the row ended with Tony's mother Barbara wanting a divorce.
Tony couldn't take it anymore and packed his bags and
went to his local orphanage and slept there!
He woke the next morning and found a fur bag next to
him. He was going to throw it out of the window when
he saw a glow inside it. He found a small red box glowing
inside the bag. Tony opened the box and found a ring
with a tiny watch with time all over the world. Tony
was astonished by the anonymous present. He put the
ring on his middle finger. Then wished he was at his
nana's house just in time to have scones and watch Countdown.
The ring glowed and Tony's eyes glowed white like Storm
on X men.
Suddenly Tony's eyes stopped glowing and went back
to green, He looked around and was astonished to see
he was in his grandma's bedroom. He had some big ideas
for this ring.
He looked down at the ring and thought of his parents'
row. The ring brought him back to his house and he saw
his parents saying sorry to each other and kissing!
Next, he decided to go back to the Time of the Dinosaurs.
He thought that he could go back to the Cretaceous Period,
the time when dinosaurs were about to become extinct.
He thought carefully and found that he was in a vast
forest.
He walked forwards and suddenly heard a roar! He looked
around and saw a giant black Tyrannosaurus running after
him! He ran as fast as he could towards a big mound
of dirt. He saw big white lumps protruding from the
mound; they were eggs! He stopped and saw his mother
coming closer to him. She started shaking him and then
he realised that it was a dream.
After his mum left the room, he laughed at what he
had seen in his dream. Suddenly, his trouser pocket
started vibrating. Then he looked in it and saw the
ring. Blood came from his hand, he thought it was his
ring so he dropped it, but his hand was still bleeding.
His hand dropped off, a bone came out of his wrist.
Then a white light came out of his body and he dropped
to the ground as both his legs fell off. The ring went
back into the box and then it disappeared.
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