Nightmare!
By Natalie Kusnyer, age 13
Nightmare! How did I get there and why? It's a question
I will probably never get the answer to. But one thing
I know for sure is that I will never forget that night.
I opened my eyes after what seemed like a very long
nightmare. I struggled to get to my feet and started
to take in my surroundings. It looked like the old dilapidated
castle on top of the hill that I had seen the week before,
while playing with my friends. Everyone said that it
was haunted, but I thought it was just a bit of silly
nonsense to scare us away from it. That was then. But
even so I never had the courage to go inside. Now I
was trapped. I looked around and saw an old grandfather
clock. It was 11:00 pm. In some parts of the room the
roof had collapsed and the moonlight crept in, casting
eerie shadows across the floor. I started to creep around
the room, hands in front, to try and find a door. An
owl screeched in the distance. Just the very sound of
it sent chills running up and down my spine.
As I moved slowly out of the room, a large chipped
and worn marble staircase came into view. As I moved
forward I started to daydream of a time when this castle
was still in use. I imagined knights in shining armour
and ladies in the most amazing dresses. I looked down
at the clothes I was wearing, I wished they were like
the dresses the women were wearing. I was astonished
to watch my old, ripped jeans and baggy t-shirt fade
away, and be replaced by a beautiful ruby studded red
ball gown. I swiftly moved through the dancing couples
to the back of the room. I stopped abruptly. In the
far corner of the room I saw, what looked like two men
duelling over a beautiful young lady. I watched until
eventually one won. Just as the sword went straight
into the other man's heart I turned away. I turned so
sharply that my dream disappeared - all the people and
my beautiful dress vanished. I looked back at that corner
and heard a scream of pain. Well at least I thought
I did. But wouldn't that be impossible? It was only
a dream after all. I heard a crash of armour hitting
the stone cold floor. I jumped. I wanted to turn away
but I couldn't. A stain that looked like human blood
spilling out onto the floor now fixated me. It was exactly
where the knight that had been killed had been. A ghostly
light appeared. I suddenly felt cold. Ice cold. This
was unusual for me, as I nearly always felt warm. I
watched in horror as the light made its way towards
me. I turned and fled up the marble staircase.
I clutched at the elegant locket my mother had given
me the night before. I slowly opened it and looked inside
at the portrait. It was of a woman. She looked young
and pretty, 18 at the most. I looked at her long, curly,
auburn hair and large, green eyes. She looked vaguely
familiar, but that was definitely impossible. The locket
dated back to the 1600s. The man on the Antiques Road
Show said so when we had it valued. So I am not likely
to see her on the street.
I felt something watching me and slowly raised my eyes
to see that light. The light I had been hiding from
for what seemed like forever. I hid the locket in the
corner of the room, summoned what little courage I had
left and climbed out of my hiding place. I watched the
light turn into a man. I noticed it was the same knight
that had been killed. I was filled with terror as I
heard the old grandfather clock strike midnight. I was
determined not to run away again so I looked him straight
in the eye. I was sure the entire colour had drained
from my face. Still I held my ground.
"What have you done with it?" Demanded the ghost.
I let my eyes quickly flicker towards the corner of
the room before answering.
"The what?" I mumbled, ashamed that my bravery had faltered
once again.
"The locket!" I looked at him blankly. "The locket with
the portrait of my darling Rachel in it!" Suddenly it
hit me - that's where the girl looked familiar from.
Once again I looked at the corner of the room. This
time he followed my gaze, but still neither of us moved.
"What do you want with it?" I asked as calmly as I could.
I watched as his face changed from a cold hard expression
to a sad lost look.
"Without it I am unable to rest in peace." Then as quickly
as his sad and sorry look came it disappeared, followed
by a long hard stare. "Give it back or I will never
let you go!" he shouted. I ran to the locket, threw
it at him and sprinted towards the door. I was surprised
at how easily I got out. I knew the minute I got home
I would be safe.
"Hey Tilly, we are going to the castle on top of that
hill! Do you want to come?" shouted my friend Kelly.
"Err no, I think I will give that one a miss!" I shouted
back. Some people don't understand why I won't go back
to the castle. I am not sure whether the knight got
his locket back and is finally resting in peace. But
every time I look at that old building I get chills
and wish that night was just a nightmare.
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